Common Errors List:
1. Some trouble with
citations and putting punctuation where it should be
Ex. “Play the most popular
games, and your personal information - and in some cases, your list of friends
- is sent to app-makers and their allies in the advertising and data-gathering
trades.” (San Francisco Chronicle).
2. Over-use of some words
that begin sentences
Ex. There, this, these
3. My voice wasn’t formal enough
sometimes (using exclamations)
Ex. Alida was never shy
and could talk to anyone she wanted to!
4. Adding things that aren’t
needed (repeating ideas)
Ex. She also has a real
passion for drawing. All of her notes and sometimes even her tests are filled
with doodles. She doesn’t draw the normal girly stars and heart, but wolves.
She’s very artistic and filled with talent.
5. Missing commas
Ex. Red chief is actually controlling them, which
is ironic in this case.
6. Missing colons
ex. The reply they receive is
not what they expect: “If you pay me two-hundred and fifty dollars, I’ll take
back the boy.”
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